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刘晓艳作文—段落

2022/5/7 英语

段落

因果递进论证 (第一句话一般都是虚拟语气)

如果我们多读书,就怎么了……(视野↑ - 知识多↑ - 成功) [顺着往下说]

常 用连词:
  • B results from A A因…导致B,因为…
  • B is a result of A B是A的结果,产生影响
  • A result in b 导致了
  • A causes / bring about / give rise to / lead to B

举例:暴力游戏

If teenagers and youngsters spent more time playing violent video games, they would imitate these actions, becoming isolated from others. As a result, they would never communicate with others, which leads to more crimes committed by the young. In the end, there would be more worrying problems in our society.

举例:Why students should be encouraged to develop effective communication skills.

If university students could develop effective communication skills, they could make more friends. In additio ns, the more friends they have, the more comfortable life they will have on campus. As a result, they will have a better learning environment, which consequently lead to a more harmonious context throughout the nation.

举例:The use of translation apps

The more popular translation apps become, the more time will be saved, which thus results in the effciency of our work. That means more tasks could be completed in a certain period. As a consequence, Chinese economy will be boosted a lot.

分类论证(在论述sth的危害或影响时适用)

  • 比如说盗版/假冒产品/不良广告的危害:对个人/集体/社会/国家

the importance of mutual understanding and respect in interpersonal relationships.

In a dormitory, if every member could understand and respect each other, they might become more creative and effective in their study. In addition, it is such mutual understanding in interpersonal relationships that will result in a warm campus environment. In the end, there would be less conflict throughout our country. How desirable the vision is.

  • 科技发展的好处

Firstly if technology develops quickly, we can benefit a lot, saving a lot of time and energy.

Then, it could lead to the rapid development of our whole country, producing more products in limited time.

  • PPT广泛应用

The use of PowerPoint is becoming increasingly popular in calss

The use of PowerPoint, to begin with, will make the knowledge more clear for students in class, thus, it is easy for them to master the key points. In addition, teachers could save a lot of time and make their classes more vividly.

举例论证

  • 阅读名著的好处

我的一个朋友,从小就阅读了大量名著,她的爱好就是读名著,每次和他谈话总觉得他的知识面很宽,很博学,作文写得也很好。

举例开头:

  • Although numerous cases are available for this argument, the following one about my XXX is the most suitable.

  • Countless cases can account for / are responsible for / contribute to the phenomenon / situation / my point, but this / these will suffice.

  • I can figure our no better illustration than the folllowing one.

  • although there are numerous cases in our daily life, the following one is the most typical.

总结:all in all, in conclusion

  • the story tells us that…
  • this case effectively clarifies the fact that…

为什么孩子要远离暴力游戏?

Although there are numerous cases in our daily life, the following one is the most typical. I have a younger brother who was naughty but cute. When he was in primary school, he learned to play video games from his classmates. At the beginning, there no abnormal signs-He went to school normally and returned home normally. Suddenly, one day, he hurt one of his friends cruelly with a knife, which was incredible to all the families. This example effectively clarifies a truth that kids can be easy to imitate behaviors from these games, which might lead to serious consequences.

文章

For this part you are allowed 30misnutes to write an essay on
whether violent video ganmes online will cause students' violent
behaviors. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 引出中心 + 个人观点

==With the rapid development of science and technology, there is a hot debate about violent video games online. From my perspective, these games will not cause violent behaviors among teenagers and youngsters.==

  • 原因引出 + 原因分析(2~3)

(and 并列两个句子 加了定语、状语) + (举三个并列句子) + (if引导虚拟语气)

The reasons for this is not far to seek. First of all, by playing online games, students (who have to spend most of their time on study and prepare various examinations) can relieve the pressure (in real life) and find like-minded peers to communicate with. In addition, these young men know clearly that online video games are virtual. At the same time the violent elements in games are unrealistic. As a consequence, the violence in online games has little impact on real life. In the end, if they were interested in something they like, there would be less violent behaviors in our society.

==[First and formost , Addtionally , Last but not least]==

[The fact that … suggest that …]

  • 总结句(总结 + 措施 + 口号)

==To sum up, it is my belief that== violent online games will not result in students violent tendency. it is necessary that parents lead their children to right directions. Only in this way can these kids make use of these games properly.



For this part you are allowed 30misnutes to write an essay online
dictionaries.You can start your essay with the sentence"The use of
online dictionaries is becoming increasingly popular."You should 
write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
  • 引出中心 + 个人观点

In light of the rapid improvement of science and technology)the use of online dictionaries is becoming increasingly popular, (which has been brought into the limelight under modern confiditions.) As far as I am concerned, we should attach importance to online dictionaries now and in the future.

  • 原因引出 + 原因分析(2~3)

The popularity of online dictionaries, (which really brings much convenience to the everyday life and study of youngsters,) may be explained by many reasons. The main factor is that using online dictionaries can save us plenty of time, which proves to be in accord with people’s pursuit for higher efficiency. Then more importantly, (it is so convenient for us to look up words on the web) because we can efforlessly and rapidly find what we want by tapping words or phrases and the answer comes in no more than several seconds. So why bother to take a thick dictionary whenever or wherever?

  • 总结句(总结 + 措施 + 口号)

In short, it is a sound conclusion that can be drawn that the use of online dictionaries, to some extent, is beneficial to English learners. So it might the right time to download one to serve us in our daily life.

议论文

第一段引出主题 + 论述观点

引出主题:

  • Recently with the development / advance / progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of … has aroused wide concern.
  • Nowadays, it is undeniable that … has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.
  • There is no doubt that the issue about sth has caused wide public attention recently.
  • Recently with the rapid development of science and technology, there is a hot debate about

表示个人观点:

  • In my opinion / as far as I am concerned / from my perspective that…(就我而言…东西好/不好)

第二段**分析原因**的总起句(三大论证方法)

原因引出:

  • The reasons for this is not far to seek.

原因分析:

  • The majority of people would agree that sth(use online dictionaries) has its deep roots.

  • As we know, recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.

  • First and formost , Addtionally , Last but not least

    The fact that … suggest that …

第三段总结 措施 倡议段

总结:

  • From what has been mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that…
  • It is high time that enough attention should be poured into this problem.
  • In short, it is a sound conclusion that can be drawn that…
  • To sum up, it is my belief that

措施:我们、政府、家长、学校

  • Student, from their early age, could be educated / proposed to learn the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.
  • Teachers could broadcast the importance of reading books among students.
  • it is necessary that

倡议:

  • So shouldn’t 人 pay much attention to the problem of …
  • So under no account could 人 divert attention from the issue of sth.
  • Only in this way can…

书信作文

第一段问候语+写作目的(比较熟) / 自我介绍+写作目的(不熟)

  • I am delighted to know that you have a strong desire to learn Chinese in recent days. Therefore, the letter, to be honest, is to recommend a city for you.

不熟

自我介绍:I am a freshman from the department of (专业) in this university

写作目的:The aim of my letter is to (文章会给出)

第二段2~3个原因分析

  • When the idea occurs to me, the first 8 city flashing in my mind is Beijing, the capital of China. Firstly, there exists language environment which plays a key role in the process of language learning. As a result, as a modern city, it provides an excellent language environment for language learners. Besides, in one of the biggest cities, people are open-minded, hospitable, and inclusive. You will soon find that you can make friends with them quickly.

第三段总结/感谢+期待回信

表示感谢:

  • I take the opportunity to show my hearfelt apperciation for your generous assistance you rendered me.

期待回信:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Finally, I hope that you could take my suggestions into serious consideration, and I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Good luck to you with all aspects of life. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

报告作文

第一段时间日期+发生事+事的结果(成功/失败)

  • On June 18, Sunday, a volunteer activity in the local Nursing House was organized by the Student Union which proves to be as success.

第二段活动具体是什么事(目的 + 内容 + 感受 + 意义)

  • The activity was aimed at encouraging students to visit the elderly at the Nursing House and help elderly people deal with their troubles in their life. Many students volunteered to participate in this good deed and were engaged in helping the elderly here out by making their meals, washing their clothes and chatting with them. When asked about those volunteers’ feelings about such an experience, all of them responded with a smile, saying “What a wonderful experience and I really appreciate this acticity beacause it makes me learn to care about those who are in heed.”

第三段总结

  • To sum up, the activity is quite successful not only for the elderly but for those students involved.

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